In a creepy wolf infested forest there was a little girl called Luna. She was busy pulling a bucket out of a well. All of a sudden a spooky flash of light was glimmering upon her. A flicker of light turned her away. All of a sudden a giant eye was in front of her. She screamed at the top of her lungs and the ghostly figure it raced and panicked and ran away like a lightning bolt.
The shimmering ghost brightened up the night. He stood up with fright. He coughed pixie dust over Luna and she looks happy as the pixie dust rains over her. The glimmering eye picked a fence and dangled it like a wind chime. He picked her up and put her down gently then reached in the well and grabbed the bucket.
As he floated up in the sky like a jellyfish she could see his eye in the bottom of the bucket knowing she had made a friend.
There are heaps of great similes in there Deklyn. Plenty of amazing words too, like "shimmering".
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